whereiszack's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[teaser total fight]

it hurt but i blamed it

Your animation is awsome, its smooth, its concise, its one of the perfect examles of stick figure animation, but your sudden intermissions totaly ruined it, i know you were trying to be funny and it was a good attempt at being funny, but you start out with the first fight animation and im all pumped up for action and then bam ive got a slide telling me 'to be continued', althought you did continue it kinda disrupted the flow of the movie. Secondly when you replay the movie the music is still going, at the end of your movie select one of the last slides of your movie and put in for the actionscript stopAllSounds(); , great movie aside from that, please send in more with your style.

jounin1 responds:

i know :P :p i forgot it but its a teaser so :P :P

[Skater4 Bad Boys INTRO]

great example

This is one of the great examples of when bad animation (not dissing the author or anything but sticks are overdone sadly, nothing like a great stick animation though :) ) is put together with great sound effects, good music, awsome timing of events and differnt kind of ideas (propellhat lol) the only thing i didnt like was the fact that the movie just got me goin and then it ended, if you say your gonna make another one please make it longer cuz i really enjoyed this submission and i want to see more, good job

MarcyVF responds:

Thank u very much! I will make it longer! :D

[Ackbar : The Trailer]

WE GOT MOTHER FUCKIN SNAKES ON THIS PLANE

dude this was great, i cant wait for the actual thing, the trailer alone is worth many many kudos

[CastleVania Fire]

it was great but the ending ruined it

dude so nice, but you got me all pumped up with all the action and then....fire...why...you should of at the very least had him kick a ton more ass and then after defeating what would seem like an endless stream of bad guys and or maybe a gigantic boss and then turn and grab the fire then i think it would be more funny, purely my opinion however because you really dont need any technical advice here, great work

[.:Super Mario Bros 3:.]

very good...but...

it was a great flash and im gonna give you a pretty good score, but, ive said it once before so i might as well say it again, were all happy to know that you worked hard, thats just super, and it does show in your work thankfully, but asking people to rate fairly shows low thoughts about yourself, theres a good amount of people that will look at a summery and see "oh please dont blam me" or "im new so take it easy on me" or something of the like, although you didnt post anything idiotic like that i just want you to have some sound advice when it comes to writing summeries, your work is great and id hate too see it get blamed because some idiot didnt even bother to watch because of your summery, great job and i look foward to your other submissions

afrodave responds:

soo... rather than rating my movie you attempted to rate my self esteem... wow...


LOL

[Ackbar : The Sequel]

Great work but short

this is awsome, i really laughed at it, but its way too short, you could of gone off an a huge tangent about "space master pencils" it was great lol, thats my only complaint is that its too short, i was really hoping for huge asorment of jokes after the alien blew up, so comeon, give us more to wet ourselfs over lol

[RPG Intro-Garden of Eden]

Im blaming this entry, not your idea

your idea is awsome, your art is great, your sound is well done, and when you make the rpg it will be something else. but this video isnt really anything sombody would be interested in, it gives some nice character bios but thats it, no real movie or game, the other thing is your intro, i had a very hard time reading it because of your poor grammer, now im not insulting you, re read my entry im pretty sure you can find several mistakes with in the first few sentances lol. but try to re read what you wrote before submitting it, and if you dont see anything wrong with the submission now maybe get a friend to read it for you, and if theres no problem there...well...then im just a dumbass lol, i look foward to your future submission

[Bobby's Apple]

i like it

im not a fan of claymation, probably cuz i was haunted by a Gumby like figure as a child lol, but seriously, i dont normaly like claymation but i enjoyed your entry, it seemed a lil dragy though, bur aside from that, pretty cool.

P.S. id give you advice on what to do but i dont work with clay sorry lol

[The Fecal Waste Collab]

I'm sorry...what?

dude i dont want to be rude or anything and you probably get posts all the time saying "that was crap" or "you suck ass" or something of the like. The point is i guess its kinda funny to the younger members of newgrounds in the 14 and lower sect, but aside from that its really not that great, the animation was ok ill give you that and so was the music, but the overall concept is really below even juvanile, im sorry but i had to blam this, i think you have real talent and that you shouldnt waist your times on such simple things as this, but thats your progative, hope to see better things from you in the future

[Between teaser]

What?

the grafics were the only thing good hear, we (when i say we i mean english speakers) have no idea what they are saying, let alone what is going on, sorry pal